Monday, October 21, 2024

Between Books - Star Wars: The HIgh Republic Beware the Nameless


Book cover for Star Wars The High Republic Beware the Nameless shwoing a young Jedi with lightsaber drawn in the middle of a young Hutt and a young blue haired girl with a dark monster with tentatcles in the background.


I promise I am not trying to hate read the High Republic!

Star Wars: The High Republic Beware the Nameless by Zoraida Córdova is a book for ages 8 to 12, which brings me to some questions about the architecture of the High Republic blueprint. These questions range from who is the intended audience and when and how you reveal important plot points.

Star Wars: The High Republic Beware the Nameless by Zoraida Córdova is a straightforward mid-reader adventure tale. Padawan Ram Jomaram, who we’ve met before, is given the mission to capture some of the Nihil’s Nameless. It appears he has been successful enough in the past to get an important mission but not enough to be promoted to Knight. His mission team is a group of young padawans and the daughter of the senator. Boom, we get a switch-up and the youngsters of this group are separated from Ram and go on their own adventure where they meet a young inquisitive Hutt, fight the Nameless, and attempt to save survivors of a Nihil attack.

Overall, the story is meant for high elementary and middle school readers, and the action revolves around them in a story that has plenty of adventure targeted to that age range. So I won’t hate review this! I did leave the book wondering about what the kids are reading and the line between adolescent and adult. When I was in Middle School, I tended to read adventure stories, so I think Córdova’s story is mostly appropriate to the age range. But it also felt like it was right on the line as a tense and brutal story. We’ve seen the Nameless in adult-aged books kill Jedi and it is harsh. This harshness does return here, spoiler not everyone you meet will make it. So I did question if the level of violence was a good fit for the intended audience. But this is from someone who was this age before books like The Hunger Games with it’s fill of even more horrific violence. When I place it in that light, it does seem like something one would find for this reading group. I will say as an older reader, it felt more straightforward without twists and turns than the stories targeted for older readers.

Let’s focus on the book for just one more moment. I do think that one of the hardest things to do in the High Republic is introduce new characters. Córdova is really successful with the introduction of Churo the Hutt. Churo has a name every Disney fan will love. He also is a character that is one of the easiest aliens to imagine in your mind. He is highly likable and easy to cheer for, he has a lot of anxiety, more than a Hutt should have. Córdova in this story provides Churo a complete arc that tells a whole chapter of his life here, while also making us want to turn the page and see what the next chapter of his book is titled. For a project that overall has failed to make me like more than a character or two, it was refreshing to have one new entry stand out.

Yoda takes a seat and chats with the kids.

Let’s get away from the book for a second. I learned a lot about the Nameless in this book. I feel like there were aspects of what the Jedi know about the Nameless, the impacts of the Nameless attacks, and even how the Jedi see the Nameless that while hinted at in the adult High Republic books were clarified more strongly in this text. I found myself wondering if this text, outside of the main adult story line, was the place where readers should be looking for these clarifications. Are there going to be adults who never read this book due to the listed age range? Maybe Córdova hoped to give clarity to a youth reader, but I kept thinking shouldn’t Avar Kriss be discovering this? Even the fact there was a Nameless hunt felt like it should have been placed in the main story. And then the newest High Republic threat the Blight showed up, and I felt yet again I was getting more information than I got in the adult books where we watched heroes study the infection. Good on you Córdova, but the architects may have missed some of their strongest impact points.

Star Wars: The High Republic Beware the Nameless by Zoraida Córdova is a fine youth adventure story. I think the younger you are the better you will enjoy it. Córdova does give us a young new hero that I think is easy for readers of all ages to understand and enjoy. But I did walk away with more questions about how the High Republic is designed and more clarity on the Nameless. 

 

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Monday, October 14, 2024

Dreaming Disney - Galactic Empire


Galactic Empire Band album cover showing the five band members in thier Star Wars costumes.



How big of a Star Wars fan am I? Big enough to use my Republic credits for tickets to a metal music show where grown men cosplayed and played heavy metal versions of Star Wars theme songs and instrumental pieces! Yeah, I’m a nerd!

Galactic Empire is a five-piece band that rocks the galaxy. As noted they primarily play Star Wars themes but with a heavy rock edge. The five members dress up as their own Star Wars characters. We get Dark Vader, a Sith Lord on lead guitar. Don’t forget the Mandalorian drummer, Boba Sett. We get an alien, a bounty hunter, and a trooper to fill out the band…a band that plays the Emperor’s favorite hits!

I personally began listening to them online. They showed up in a music feed as a suggestion, a suggestion where the Force was strong! I read a lot of books with instrumentals playing in the background. When I read a Star Wars book, I play themed music. And Galactic Empire spiced up the mix from the regular orchestral John Williams themes I was playing when visiting a galaxy far far away.

The five costumed members of Galactic Empire playing in front of a crowd.


I recently attended a Galactic Empire concert live. I pulled the Between Bride into this wildness who stared with awe and fear as I jammed out to “Cantina Band” a smidge more than a grown man should. I think the first question about going to a Galactic Empire concert is literally, will I fit in? I found the crowd to be nerds like me mostly! Some were Star Wars bounding, some wore Star Wars novelty shirts like me, while others were clearly metal fans. But almost everyone was really there to have a good time. It never felt as overwhelming as a convention, and reminded it most of when I saw Dick Dale playing in a grimy college bar with just a mix of open-minded fans.

Now, here’s my biggest complaint. They did move away from just Star Wars anthems. They played the “Indiana Jones Theme” which they have also released. But they also played “Main Theme” from Pirates of the Caribbean and “The Avengers Main Theme” which were true bangers, and I really want to be able to access recordings of them when reading in other genres. But perhaps, those tunes are the dark side!
 



The band Galactic Empire is fun. They dress up and don’t take themselves too seriously while making some really fun music. Would I go again, yes! And I really do hope they continue to put out metal versions of some of my favorite Disney themes, including those from other galaxies. 


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Monday, October 7, 2024

Between Books - Directing at Disney

Cover for Directing at Disney showing Walt Disney and Wilfred Jackson reviewing storyboards.



What does a director of an animated film do? What did Walt Disney do as “director” as he opened his 1923 cartoon studio? What do directors do today? Honestly, it may be more complicated than you think!

Directing at Disney: The Original Directors of Walt’s Animated Films by Don Peri and Pete Doctor outlines the history of animation directors from pre-Disney Brothers Studios to the retirement of one of the original Nine Old Men Woolie Reitherman. Peri and Doctor start the book dropping us into early 20th-century animation, a time when animators were assigned scenes and largely were unsupervised by studio leadership in scene production. Walt Disney, as the visionary creative force behind his studio, took on a bigger role at his shop, dictating and approving the shots in his cartoon shorts. As the studio grew, Ub Iwerks, would take on a more supervisory role taking some of the roles from Disney that we would label directorial today. As this division of labor was more defined as the studio grew, Walt Disney filled the role of creative visionary with directors taking on the coordination and supervisory roles. And while not called directors, Iwerks and Burt Gillett took on these direction roles allowing Disney to focus his attention elsewhere. Director Dave Hand would fight to even better define the role of Disney directors in organization and authority, with the hope that the organization could create an efficient creative machine…but Disney would often interfere with the efficiencies Hand desired through his personality. Peri and Doctor provide chapters to highlight other key Disney directors such as Ben Sharpsteen, and Wilfred Jackson, up until Reitherman, detailing the evolution of organizational, supervisory, and creative roles including the differences between directors, sequence directors, and other directing roles. Much of this evolution follows the trail of creative vision, moving fully from Disney as a producer to Reitherman as director providing his own stories much like modern Disney directors do today.

There is a lot to love about this book. It easily could have slid into a reference-type book with a dull narrative. The tools of a reference book are here, with eye-catching illustrations that detail complicated organizational relationships and appendixes that list out titles and credits for directing-type positions. But Peri and Doctor run from reference only and use their chapters to provide us with biographical stories that clearly show roles, authority, and change. They often come with personality. For example, Sharpsteen is a figure that I have often seen animators complain about as a company man who was macro-managing. Peri and Doctor don’t run from this characterization. But they do place in the context of the needs of the studio at the time and Sharpsteen’s personality. What others may have seen as overbearing, Sharpsteen saw as parental. This personality element makes this more than a bland reference that sits on a shelf just to answer a trivia question or comparison data. It is a story of people working within a changing organization, and often struggling with this change.

There is a line between publicity and history that can sometimes be merged in the corporate press of a major firm. I can see how modern leadership would have loved a book that came out and said, “Everything was fine.” But the book to me illustrates the tension. Walt Disney’s interests changed. The book details the lives of individuals who had opinions of their own about how to best make animated films and shorts and often did not agree with each other. Some personalities fell out of favor with Walt Disney himself. Maybe because of Doctor’s authority within modern Disney, I feel a story is told that does not make heroes out of legends or hide the tension. For example, Dave Hand who loved structure as seen by his reproduced organization chart, did have personality conflicts with Walt Disney. This led to a falling out that left Hand outside of the studio. How others saw directors like Sharpsteen and Reitherman is clear. Maybe along with Doctor’s current personal authority within the company, this tension between guidance and authority is found in his journey, and something he was very well aware of, as being a leader is not always about being beloved.

Directing at Disney: The Original Directors of Walt’s Animated Films by Don Peri and Pete Doctor is a gorgeously illustrated book telling a story of organizational evolution and the personalities that helped build the changing role of animation directors. It is a frank discussion about change within a corporate body and the tensions that this creates. Peri and Doctor note the years they worked on this volume, and it was well-spent by providing a book that allows us to see the directors and not just the trivia.

Monday, September 30, 2024

Oswald Opines - Marvelous Missteps?

Movie poster for Captain America: New World Order showing the hand or Red Hulk gripping Captain America's shield.
Captain America: New World Order
 

Marvel Cinematic Universe movies are expensive! The reality is to make a profit they need to bring in not just hardcore fans, but also those with just general interest.


Also, in our post-pandemic world, it has become more difficult to convince moviegoers to leave their couch and visit a theater. I’m shocked to say that at this moment there are two movies I have seen in the theater with Deadpool and Wolverine and Beatlejuice Beatlejuice. I’m honestly not sure I couldn’t have waited for Tim Burton’s latest even with me enjoying it. There is a chance that I will be catching two in-theater movies during the Thanksgiving weekend, but that’s due to the occasion and family plans.

Here is my worry.

I feel like before Avengers: Endgame there were generally a story and cast linkage that kept moviegoers coming. Yes, Guardians of the Galaxy was risky, but even there we had an Infinity Stone to bring the skeptical into the story. By the time that Doctor Strange hit the screen there was some trust to get moviegoers who knew nothing about the Sorcerer Supreme would go and view the film.  

Now, in the shadow Deadpool and Wolverine, I have worries. The next films have no cast or story connections to the only MCU movie of 2024! So I don’t think Logan or Wade can halo the next MCU film to a massive hit.

This got me thinking about what’s next. We have Captain America: Brave New World and I think this will be a hard sell. Let’s take a look!

 




First, we have politics. I’m not sure that with real-life politics and tension this is going to pull fans to the movies. Let’s add, that I’m not sure that even those who have watched Falcon and the Winter Soldier are going to be fully immersed in the complexities of their political difficulties. I don’t even know what I should be tracking as important with the complications of Disney+’s Secret Invasion which best might be forgotten like Kang. Harrison Ford may have replaced the alien-hating President from that series. But who knows and who cares? I don’t even know if need to see this as a sequel to one specific Disney+ mini-series, which I’m not sure how many watched. And I’m vague because I’m not sure what series it is a sequel to!

February 2025’s Captain America: Brave New World has three things going for it. First, the title indicates to viewers that this film is a continuation of the Chris Evan’s franchise. Second, it features Anthony Mackie who helps that feeling by giving us a familiar face we can cheer for and who was present before Avengers: Endgame. And finally, as Disney fans we all love Harrison Ford, and find ourselves amused with the fact he was willing to join the franchise. I think, or maybe hope, that Captain America: Brave New World will perform okay, with it being the next film after a hit and some familiar faces, even if many fans don’t understand or want to understand the political atmosphere post-Snap (sorry it’s the Snap not Blip to me). 


Thunderbolts* Movie Poster showing the anti-heroes jumbled up showing all of their faces and weapons together uncomortablely
Thunderbolts*


Now, the next release for May 2025, really has me worried with Thunderbolts*



When I watched this trailer with family who have matched most of the MCU, they kept saying, who, what, and when. This is also someone who has fatigue in tracking all MCU threads. Also…not to be mean, but this is another Disney+ sequel. Black Widow, sadly, was a Disney+ movie. Falcon and the Winter Soldier, with Bucky the one pre-Endgame hero was Disney+, and that’s the only place we have seen John Walker. And poor Ghost, by this viewer, was forgotten from Ant-Man and the Wasp. Honestly, most of these anti-heroes except for Bucky, Red Guardian, and Belova Widow were at the back of my mind. And let’s toss in the fact that Bob is really not a known hero, he’s not a cult favorite, and he’s really not “fun”. Many are going to look at the trailer and compare it to Suicide Squad which was not a good time for everyone. I just think this is going to be a harder sell to broad audiences. So I worry that Thunderbolts* is not going to do well, I worry we are looking at our next Eternals unless Han Solo can give them a halo effect!


So Robert Downey Jr. is coming back, now as Doctor Doom. There are a lot of people who are saying this is a bad move. This is a necessary move. This is the type of casting that will remind average fans of his days as Iron Man. He is an award-winning actor who’s done great things since leaving the MCU. He’s also a face and name that audiences connect with the franchise. Is it odd that is he playing someone else, yeah sure. But is it familiar to see him doing press for the MCU, yes..yes it is. The MCU needs to be a little less risky and experimental at the moment as it reasserts itself!


To have nice things, we need people to pay for them. I worry that the MCU isn’t going to grab the attention of moviegoers in this current resistance to theater seats unless they do something drastic. Bringing back familiar faces that audiences love could be that piece to move us back. And if we learned anything from Deadpool and Wolverine we need permission to have fun again in our tights and bed sheets. I believe that by the time we get to the Avengers movies that Kevin Fiege will have us back on course. But first, we may have to allow a downturn again.


Monday, September 23, 2024

Between Books - The Origins of Walt Disney’s True-Life Adventures

 

Book cover for The Origins of Walt Disney's True-Life Adventures showing  the True-Life logo of a compass with the film series title.



I feel like Walt Disney’s True-Life Adventures is under-represented within Disney fandom. The films are not available on Disney+. It feels to me like they are only really mentioned in some publicity for the yearly Disney Nature feature offering. We need to squint to connect some intellectual property in the parks. Yet telling the stories of nature has historically been a long-existing theme for the Walt Disney Company as seen in the mentioned Disney Nature brand and an entire theme park in Disney’s Animal Kingdom.

The Origins of Walt Disney’s True-Life Adventures by Didier Ghez, the second volume of the film monograph series of the Hyperion Historical Alliance, dives deep into the origins of this Disney theme, beginning as early as the development of Bambi. Ghez addresses head-on the myth that the True-Life Adventures and the release of the first short in 1948, Seal Island, started with a brief interaction between Walt Disney and Disney Legend Cinematographer Alfred Milotte. Instead, we start in the 1930s with the production of the 1942 animated forest feature. Artist Maurice “Jake” Day was charged with capturing live-action references and images from his native Maine. Day’s trips into the wild, provided reference that helped Disney executives begin to see the possibilities of nature documentaries. With production in the early 1940s focused heavily on educational films during World War II, this interest continued as the studio attempted to find ways to monetize the educational market. This exploration would lead to Alfred Milotte and his wife, assistant, and fellow Disney Legend Elma Milotte being contracted to film material in Alaska in 1943.

Ghez provides us with an in-depth view of the Milottes in their production process in Alaska, brilliantly weaving together his own narrative with original journals and letters. The reader follows the pair as they learn to film to Hollywood standards and struggle with practices like using a slate in atypical conditions. The pages, and images, help us watch the two grow as they explore a world that for much of the 1940s was a true frontier for most Americans, with some of them seeming familiar to us who today catch episodes of The Deadliest Catch. Ghez chronicles for us how those at the studio viewed the filmed material and struggled with determining how to use the hours of unedited reels the duo in the field created. The final decision was to focus on one shorter segment, not long enough for a feature but an adequate story for a theatrical short. The book concludes with the production of additional True-Life Adventures and their legacy. An appendix provides the reader with the credits of the True-Life Adventures series.

It is a very well-written and engaging book. You at times feel like you have joined some of these expeditions and share in their logistical hurdles. How will we get to that remote island the reader asks, throwing themselves into the wilderness journey. I also found myself sympathizing with the Milottes as they read the criticisms of production supervisor Ben Sharpsteen. As Sharpsteen wrote, safely and warmly from California, Ghez’s writing can place us in the Milottes’ shoes as they are just trying to get to their far-flung locations while the studio is worried about angles, coverage, and proper use of slates (which of course did not work well in frigid temperatures). Ghez is able to get us here through his well-placed reproduced primary sources where through journal or letter the participants in their own words bring us back in time while using his added narration to set scenes and provide transitions.

Another strength of the book is the well-placed use of illustrations and images. The Hyperion Historical Alliance prides itself in not just narrative history, but sharing visual artifacts. Therefore there are several still pictures, archival illustrations, and even pages of storyboards that help the reader to better immerse themselves into the subject. The total package of words and images shows a high value to editorial skills for the finished text.

The book is very origins-heavy, which makes sense as that’s what the title promises! One may ask for additional information about what happened next in more detail. But that feels like a potential follow-up and not a piece that has to fall within the scope of this title as it is not meant to be a comprehensive history.

The Origins of Walt Disney’s True-Life Adventures by Didier Ghez is an excellent and engaging book on what is often a forgotten Disney live-action endeavor. Ghez’s words and pictures pull us into a story, one that is part studio history and part adventure tale. It also helps us to better see the story of the Milottes up close where we can see their contributions to film history.


Addendum: While text is available on Amazon, I purchased my copy at Stuart Ng Books website which offered an autographed copy. Additionally, other autographed Hyperion Historical Alliance publications were available there online.


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Monday, September 16, 2024

Cap's Comics - What If…? Donald Duck Became The Mighty Thor


Cover for What If...? Donald Duck Became thor showing Donald Duck as Thor fighting Stone Ducks
Lorenzo Pastrovicchio Cover


This summer we have been graced with Marvel comics that celebrated Disney classic characters with them taking the roles of Thanos and Wolverine. But summer has to end! Let’s end it with one last adventure.

“What If…? Donald Duck Became The Mighty Thor” with plot by Steve Behling, script by Riccardo Secchi, and art by Giada Perissinotto gives us one more look at the 90-year-old duck taking up the mantle of a Marvel hero. In this one-shot comic, Donald Duck takes his nephews on a Norwegian vacation to an ancient archaeological Viking site so they can earn their Junior Woodchuck medal for Ancient Viking Relic Explorers. While scrounging for priceless Viking heirlooms, the Earth is invaded by the Stone Ducks of Saturn who land on this ancient site. Donald seeking shelter from the danger finds an old wooden cane which when knocked grants a worthy one, wow Donald look at you, the power of the ancient Norse God Thor. Equipped with these new abilities, the Mighty Donald is the only hero who can save us all! 

Variant cover for What if ...? Donald Duck Became Thor showing Donald Duck as Thor being struck by lightening.
Phil Noto Donald Duck Thor Cover


Of the three Disney specials we got this summer, this one is the most all-ages and maybe a little bit more kid-focused than the rest. There is a little less inside adult humor to me, with this offering being more of a kids-friendly brawl and fight story. The biggest Easter Egg for adults is the story’s heavy parallels to the original Journey into Mystery #83 story “The Mighty Thor and the Stone Men from Saturn” which was Stan Lee’s, Larry Lieber’s, and Jack Kirby’s debut of their Norse hero in 1962. The story in many cases is beat-for-beat of the original Marvel classic. And maybe this is why it seems more kid-friendly, with it being a very 1960s plot at a time when comics were more kid-focused. I do like the changes, with movie star Korg’s Stone Men being turned into Stone Ducks, which fit the story well.

Donald Duck is a good uncle and a horrible archeologist! 

Variant cover for What If...? Donald Duck Became Thor showing a artistic Donald as Thor shown from the side ready to strike his hammer.
Peach Momoko Cover


Perissinotto has given us art for two of these stories now. The art here is very approachable and inviting. One of the changes you will notice here is the writing duties shared. The plot was provided by Behling who has written a handful of young reader books for Disney, many using Stitch. The script, just like you would see in a movie with the frame-by-frame and line-by-line framework for the artist, was developed by Secchi. Secchi does not have many comic credits, but he has written Disney classic characters with an issue of Disney Hero Squad: Ultrahumans served up to readers over a decade ago at Boom! Studios. It’s not uncommon to see plot and script duties separated. One of my favorite examples is DC’s Justice League International. But much of the vigorous debate in the Marvel world is that often Stan Lee provided plots while his artists like Jack Kirby really did the scripting at various levels of detail. Which at times, did not make it clear who was responsible for what among the old masters. Overall, the team does a nice job, as I think kids would appreciate this story which may seem familiar if they have seen any of the Marvel Cinematic Universe.

However, I do wonder if the inclusion of an editor’s letter and some concept development pages in the end hint they may have been a little short in story? 

Variant cover for What If...? Donald Duck Became Thor showing Donald Duck as Thor looking at his and slamming the hammer down.
Walter Simonson Cover


“What If…? Donald Duck Became The Mighty Thor” with plot by Steve Behling, script by Riccardo Secchi, and art by Giada Perissinotto reminds us that summer always comes to an end! I have as a Disney and Marvel fan gotten a chuckle out of these one-shot comics. I have appreciated how on different levels there is something here for kids and adults, much like this issue. 

Variant cover of What If Donald Duck Became Thor showing a cute version of Donald as Thor flying through the air in circles being pulled by the hammer.
Skottie Young Cover


Turning the last page…wait, Minnie becomes Captain Marvel in November! Yes, please!

Monday, September 9, 2024

Between Books - The Jungle Cruise: The Wild History of Walt's Favorite Ride Second Edition


Cover for The Jungle Cruise: The Wild History of Walt's Favorte Ride showing the title over a variety of fauna and plants.



Two things can be true at once!

FACT: The Jungle Cruise: The Wild History of Walt’s Favorite Ride Second Edition is an interesting, fun, and factual chronicle of The Jungle Cruise which highlights the impact that cast members have had on the evolution of the beloved attraction.

FACT: The Jungle Cruise: The Wild History of Walt’s Favorite Ride Second Edition is a poorly delivered and executed book that has numerous misprints, odd prints, repetitions, and miscellaneous errors that distract from the reader’s experience while lowering the ability for a fan, like me, to claim it’s a truly authoritative history of the attraction.

The Jungle Cruise: The Wild History of Walt’s Favorite Ride by David “Dr. Skipper” Marley is a book that had not joined my Between Books yet. But with the printing of a second edition, I jumped online to Dr. Marley’s Etsy page to buy an autographed copy. It is likely the most excited I have been about a book in the mail for the last several years.

The Jungle Cruise: The Wild History of Walt’s Favorite Ride Second Edition by David “Dr. Skipper” Marley provides a historical account of the development, growth, and current state. Marley, a trained and practicing historian, uses the narrative history of the attraction, his own history with the boat ride, and oral histories to offer an entertaining and interesting account of the Disney original. The chapters are typically long and cover long stretches of park history. The book starts in Anaheim, but includes development and growth for the versions in Orlando Tokyo, and Hong Kong while addressing why some parks like Paris lack a jungle cruise. The book ends with a current state survey of the attraction, post inclusion edits and a world with a Jungle Cruise big budget movie. Marley, being a former skipper, does an excellent job of using the collective memory of the skippers and demonstrating the impact the attraction had on these cast members and the legacies they have left.

I for the most part really enjoyed this book. I am running around with my newest fun fact, The Jungle Cruise in the Magic Kingdom park is on the ground level of the park. It’s on the same floor as the utilidors! I mean it feels like the mind should realize that as we walk down the incline, but it took the book to point it out. There were numerous factual discoveries like these that I enjoyed. The text is generally entertaining, which can be in question when written by an academic. I did enjoy the use of interviews and skipper quotes throughout the text. Marley provides a text that often tickled this fan boy’s heart. He writes in a conversational style that is entertaining and often sparks joy.

Now the other truth. This book is an editing mess. If it was a Kindle book I would expect an update correcting the editing and printing errors that frankly gets in the way of the journey. These mistakes(shortened list for time) include,

  • Printing errors that include incomplete letters and odd or inconsistent spacing
  • Editing mistakes including incorrect or inconsistent use of punctuation (double or misspaced periods), use of italics, conflicting factual claims in the same sentence
  • At least 3 instances with reprinted paragraphs printed on a span of 2 to 3 pages
  • Gaps in sources, for example Marley clearly has an opinion about the movie, but his discussion of the budget and reactions lack cited sources


I did not expect this from a second edition, though mistakes can occur like this in self-published books. While I don’t have the first edition, it does seem from other comments that the editing mistakes, and thank you to an editor, occurred in the firs edition. I get it! Authors can simply get to close to their work. I will admit that both me and an editor missed numerous instances of the word “solider” in place of “soldier” in a past project. I am not super detailed writer, and I”m sure this blog is full of mistakes. But the problems become an obstacle to digging into the story of the jungle. I’d love to see Marley write a history for Disney Press, but his frank discussion would likely not fit within the publishing house’s goals. What I would really want is a publisher to work with Marley and fashion a really well done and executed third edition. Because at the moment, any endorsement I would make about this book includes the caveat, it is not edited or printed well. So you need to think carefully if the $40 is worth it to you.

Hey authors, I’m willing to read through drafts or proofs to help find obvious mistakes, because if I can see mistakes more critical readers will definitely find plenty.

Jungle Cruise I love you, but sometimes your books seem to be hindered by publication and editing. The Jungle Cruise: The Wild History of Walt’s Favorite Ride by David “Dr. Skipper” Marley is an interesting and often entertaining reflection on the Jungle Cruise and their skippers important to our fandom. It is also a inadequately produced volume, which has errors that limits the text’s authority. I found both enjoyment and frustration on these pages…because two things can be true.

 

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